the rap brap offcial rap thread

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Alright, Melbourne, the children are gone.


Back to business now.

[TJ Hooker]

damn elite, i just re read my rap, and son you got bodied it wasnt even close, to beat the champ, you gotta BEAT the champ.
you didn't..

[TheGodEmperor]

It depends who is judging it...you both have different style....TJ has more swagger and bad-grammared allusions that still retain a certain appeal, whereas ELITE is going for he ironic wit...neither of your metre is very clean...alot of inconsistency, so I say you each write as intense a couplet as you can and I'll judge which is better

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it's time for the hook to realize that he's out of line
since melbourne won't respond i guess i'll have to waste my time
with
rhymes too flagrent to be called in the nba
as I say, hook, you've got a lot of nerve to try and call me out
i've been a god on this forum since the year 2004
and my reign won't be broken by TJ Hooker, TJ Whore
i suggest you plead the fifth before you step back up to face me
you can't play in my ballpark, nigga, your swing can't even phaze me
roll with me
and see if you could run shit down here in the south
i was swimming in a cat 5 hurricane while you were busy running your mouth
i've been through the shit that bitches like you only see on tv
you can't beat me
number one murder capital in the states, that's where i reside
on the grind daily, while you sit on the bay side
please
don't talk about reality or streets with me dunny
you claim you kill the most, but a gun would scare you funny
i mean silly
really, i see cats like you in the streets every day
in thier mom and dad's benz blasting eminem and dr. dre
don't front like you're thugging out on forums and dot com's
bitch you're at soccer tournaments with your fucking soccer mom
claim hood if you want, but we've always known that you're fraud as fuck
elitestriker mother fucker, don't ever again push your luck

[TJ Hooker]

It depends who is judging it...you both have different style....TJ has more swagger and bad-grammared allusions that still retain a certain appeal, whereas ELITE is going for he ironic wit...neither of your metre is very clean...alot of inconsistency, so I say you each write as intense a couplet as you can and I'll judge which is better

Yo man, big ups for an honest reply you kept it neutral without hatin, thats treal  :cheers:
I don't honestly think elite is whack,  its just gamesmanship
he still aint at ya boys level though.
Elite i'll get at you tomorrow cutty, i'm off, just signed in to read

fa sho late 1

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it's battle rap, no harm done

one dog.

[moby]

this place is booming, WTF happened to the rap tornoment


haha lol oli stay up  :cheers:


how about team rap matches nothing big just example ELITE - TF10 vs Melbourne - Tito


then TF10 - Melbourne vs Tito - TJ hook

then TJ Hook - Elite vs TF10 - Tito

just some thing new for once, and unlike conner i'll keep it updated, by the looks of it nobody is keeping a grudge so you guys can work together right?

[TJ Hooker]

TJ Hooker, TJ Whore, whatever the case may be Im the one they fiend for
and i lean raw, I can see through you like a screen door,
you thought you was like slick creepin in the green ford,
but yo mama will be screamin, when you machinin', "Doctor please don't pull that green cord!"
My flow is hard like viagra in a piss stream
money is my reality, you just a have a rich dream, New Orleans is that snitch scene
out here in the 510 (oaklannnnnd) we hustlin', we git cream. I was richer than your dad when i was fifteen
I'm nastier than what's in an asian kid's lunchpack
Elite, if you wore my chain for a week you would be hunchback,
you call me TJ train the way i run tracks, after we fought for 3 seconds you would runback
I can fight cutty I brawl like winky, rollin' up the stinky, in that Vantage sittin' on twinkys,
check out my ring, Arabian diamonds you can't spot no flaws on my pinky,
I run things, I am on that Presidential shit, where the fuck is Monica Lewinksy?
My rhymes is dope liek i go on the mic and shoot base,
you pack thongs on vacation and i am rollin with lettuce in the suitcase
your too sweet elite, you givin me a toothache, melbourne you need to lose weight
i could body your whole crew with one round cause i don't shoot straight
leave you powerless like if popeyes spinach was lost, elite easy to diminsh--he soft
Katrina aint do the job right, God sent Hurricane Hook to come and finish you off

[oLi]

that was aweful, tj u suck.
peace to ma bro mo-bo.

[TJ Hooker]

this place is booming, WTF happened to the rap tornoment


haha lol oli stay up  :cheers:


how about team rap matches nothing big just example ELITE - TF10 vs Melbourne - Tito


then TF10 - Melbourne vs Tito - TJ hook

then TJ Hook - Elite vs TF10 - Tito

just some thing new for once, and unlike conner i'll keep it updated, by the looks of it nobody is keeping a grudge so you guys can work together right?

Yeah i aint got nothing against nobody. Elite is my boy, me and melbourne squashed it after our battles, totalfootball
 and me is cool , Tito is my boy, Moby your my boy. aint nothin against nobody, its just battlin


oh and big ups elite, nice drop

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@ melbourne: you can hold off until i'm done with this cat. let me spit at you hook, check it:


i'm spottin the raps that you're spittin' as some rich boy shit
you said that money is your reality, so how hood are you bitch?
i've surivived in the third world with real mother fuckers carrying machetes
i've seen shotgun totin' essay's cookin niggas like grade A spaghetti
bitch you aint ready
to roll in to a neighborhood where cigs are currency
from honduras to new orleans nigga, your life's a britney spears movie
you talk about being hard, but shut up; i can't allow it
bitch you have the nerve to call me soft when your mom gives you a daily allowance
you claim diamonds on your pinky and platinum chains upon your neck
what's next?
your spelling test? bitch you ain't even fucking grown yet
and better yet, i'll sublet you a taste of the hoods that i've been in
while you were in your dads Lexus chillin, i was paying bills for my parent's children
i've seen the sickest thugs illin'
i've seen shotguns with full shells in
i've seen fathers lose thier families because money issues killin'
i've been in barrios full of thugs who don't give a fuck about your feelin's
i've had third world country water that left me shittin' out the ceilin'
bitch when it comes to living hood you've got  nothing on me
i'm not a g, but i damn sure have had my fair share of poverty
so stunt your chains and spin your rims while real niggas stay on the grind
bitch i've told you multiple times that rhymes epitomize my mind

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[oLi]

elite dun killed it. Tj hook u just got shook