lol some nice turns of phrase in there tj...and by the way, this isn't poetry, this is rap. I am not following technique at all, mainly because I can't be bothered to labour over every iambus or trochee, which is what it takes to write real rhyming poetry.
anyhow:
I need none of your lip,
my rhymes are freudian slips
of truth and not lies,
they bludgeon and they terrorize
you who can't face the reality,
my omnipotent totality...
prove me wrong bitches,
I'm waiting to see
a word to refute my divinity,
my words put your brain in stitches,
unveiling truth and riches
free of logical glitches,
and whether I write tonight
in dactylic hexameter
or iambic pentameter,
a villanelle or pantoum,
my lines illuminate the darkened room
of the mind, and showl the real world --
all your delusions into inexistence are hurled.
