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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #12 on: Mar 02, 2009, 09:27: AM »
it was good  :thumbsup:

A bit to many 'normal' juggles, try to find a better flow between the styles and tricks/combos.

Otherwise it was really good, hope you win man!
Thanks Gustav, I will try to improve it!
I need more of those constructive message so I can do better next time!  :cheers:

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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #13 on: Mar 02, 2009, 09:30: AM »
Hmm your not as good as I thought, at LP's at least.

Ive had experience recently in a TV Talent Show just like this, it gets nervous, but these are the occasions we live for man, no excuses brother, sorry.

BUT, what i will say is: Unlucky with some tricks, look at it this way..............

We dont make mistakes, we just find ways that dont work.

Work on it, and I can see you putting together a really technical show.

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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #14 on: Mar 02, 2009, 09:44: AM »
very nice lp, u kinda messed up a few times, and maybe next time just dont re try the soles cause u messed up twice and it looked like u couldnt do them at all u know. maybe do something else and come back to them after u calmed down u konw.

try and do some grounds as well. like at the begining do grond then do ur uppers and then do some lowers and then sits and then lowers and then uppers so u dont finish with a bunch of uppers,

try to vary ur performance
dont do all lowers then all uppers, switch it up and try to incorporate some sean stuff in there cause thats wat the crowd likes.

dont get me wrong i hate watching sean for more then like 1 min. but put some stuff in there cause thats wat crowds like!!

good luck big guy..

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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #15 on: Mar 02, 2009, 10:14: AM »
yes, put some different stuff and impressive movements!
like throw the ball all the way up with neckstall then catch it back, crowds like when the ball goes "far" hehe
and I think that this one could've been shorter, because I see that you put a lot of hard tricks on it, as magellan for ex.; and you could of saved it for the other round, because the judges were liking it since the beggining :)
or, there is not another round before the votes? sorry if i am wrong hehe ;)

overall, very good, nice magellan and cross - matw nt!]

congratulations, since, as you said, you don't have much experience on LP!  :thumbsup:

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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #16 on: Mar 02, 2009, 10:20: AM »
- Create a routine and practice it till you know it by heart
- Make your performance shorter (this was the audition if I'm not mistaken, no need for a performance longer than 1:30-2:00 max)
- Less juggling and more tricks which will give your performance better flow
- Incorporate some transitions into your performance
- Listen to the song and go out there and enjoy yourself
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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #17 on: Mar 02, 2009, 10:28: AM »
that chick was all over you bro XDD
very nice im gonna vote for u man  :thumbsup:
good luck
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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #18 on: Mar 02, 2009, 11:06: AM »
that chick as all over you bro XDD
very nice im gonna vote for u man  :thumbsup:
good luck

hahahaha yes, indeed!!  :banana:

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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #19 on: Mar 02, 2009, 11:07: AM »
Dude you got some great constructive criticism so take note!

What did the judges say? I guess the girl liked it and the green shirt guy didn't? And the guy on the far right looked so gormless the whole way through haha.

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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #20 on: Mar 02, 2009, 12:58: PM »
amazing... the woman looked really surprised... I want to know what the baldy judge sayd... I fim not wrong he sayd something about circus, right??

how curious, weman are allway's the one's who dont valorate freestyle skills, if someone saw sean and emil talent show performance's then you will know what Imtalking about

btw, awesome performance, you hadnt so much mistakes as I thought after reading the comments... the performance was sick long, wich gave a step difficulty to your consistancy skills, but overall it was good, cool variation, that magellan killed it...
some advice: try to do more and more tricks wich entretain ppl, because when you did magellan the judges didn't react like some freestyler would see it.... remember, entertainment is esential, wait... its not esential, entertainment is ALL YOU NEED to atract the audience...
I'm not saying it was not entertaining, I say you could be even more entertainig with ppl who dont know a shit about freestyle...

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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #21 on: Mar 02, 2009, 01:22: PM »
very good!
but i think you can do better :thumbsup:

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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #22 on: Mar 02, 2009, 09:29: PM »
I Think you did a ok show, but like Gustav said, try to get more flow. You did a lot of normal juggling.
Really nice magellan and cross matw nt at the end :thumbsup: And you did every tricks whit styyyle!

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Re: Sven at "Wanns de eppes kanns!"
« Reply #23 on: Mar 02, 2009, 10:41: PM »
Thanks for the tips! I'm hope I can do better next round if I get enough votes!