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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #432 on: Oct 15, 2008, 06:21: PM »
no offense? well none taken
i know you ain't hating
cause if you it you are thats a lyrical flaw
knock knock bitch open the door
my raps are hot but you just ignore
wait here it comes... brace your-self for
a warning of war
if you gone back up do it now before
i let rip on your punk ass
heres a tip skip class
and think about quitting this rap shit
you ain't gone last
your too stubborn to recognize
so when i win don't get surprised
your best to be advised
your moves ain't wise
your chances of winning is a million to one
so back off son
you've been outdone
but if you want we can restart
and i'll act like this shit never begun

you ain't the greatest until your most hated

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #433 on: Oct 16, 2008, 09:08: AM »
You've got nothing on me,
why can't you see
that I'm your lord and master,
you're pavement, I'm alabaster,
you're copper, I'm gold,
how many time you gotta be told,
my words are bold
yours are craven,
they run away savin'
their own skins,
and now the party begins,
my re-coronation,
though many would call it
an emancipation,
and you sought to stall it,
and this is my proclamation,
so you best pay attention,
so I need not make mention
of your horrible rhymes,
they're like heinous crimes
punishable by death,
so you best take a breath
and re-evaluate
your situation
and try to eliminate
your chronic masturbation.
Mané Garrincha
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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #434 on: Oct 16, 2008, 04:56: PM »
you still replying
quit that fake shit dog we know you lying
but keep trying
your just whining while i'm shining
and i never stop glowing
you take breaths while i keep going
my flow is growing
while your lacks lyrical evolution
your raps are just like pollution
there are may solutions
but none have a quick effect
as if you had a mental birth defect
and i detect the slightest attempt to infect
my lyrical intellect
and i'm perfect in that respect
now step back and know who your talking to
this is a analytical review
i can use big words too
you never knew?
your beating is overdue
i'm like when a breeze through
and this fame you pursue
is out of your reach
your like a leech
they say everything good must come to an end
but it ain't true for me my friend
and they say what goes must come down
but i just be hanging up there
on the throne with my crown

you ain't the greatest until your most hated

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #435 on: Oct 17, 2008, 08:04: AM »
You say you also possess
the ability
to gain a prowess
in vocabulary,
but you've gotta use the words right
to have lexiconographical might --
you're throwing them out there
in midair,
their placement don't make sense,
they're just mute grandiloquence,
fake opulence,
so here's the consequence:
you try to imitate my style,
man you're not that agile,
you can't go the full mile
using my quality of diction
without experiencing friction
between meaning and sound,
so bite the dust and hit the ground,
you've already begun to fall,
face bleeding, whipped, back against the wall,
so off you crawl,
you're nothing but my thrall,
the fool in my great hall.
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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #436 on: Oct 17, 2008, 10:05: AM »
yo whats up nigga
ima kill you with this trigga
stop jerkin off to hannah montanah
or else get panna'd
by issy the hitman
or else Van Gils
and get back home in time
tune into ur fav show The Hills


gayboys... dont mess with Irish Gansgtaz u better learn this shit homie before i ride all ova y'all bitch-ass mcNugget faggets


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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #437 on: Oct 17, 2008, 01:17: PM »
You say you also possess
the ability
to gain a prowess
in vocabulary,
but you've gotta use the words right
to have lexiconographical might --
you're throwing them out there
in midair,
their placement don't make sense,
they're just mute grandiloquence,
fake opulence,
so here's the consequence:
you try to imitate my style,
man you're not that agile,
you can't go the full mile
using my quality of diction
without experiencing friction
between meaning and sound,
so bite the dust and hit the ground,
you've already begun to fall,
face bleeding, whipped, back against the wall,
so off you crawl,
you're nothing but my thrall,
the fool in my great hall.
who you trying to impress with all the jargon
my rhymes are a bargain
cause i don't dwell too much into my vocabulary
i'm more famous than the virgin mary
if i were you i wouldn't talk about style
reading your raps aren't worthwhile
the only style you do is doggy man
with a guy behind a van
in a dark alley
do the math add up the tally
i won
you walking into a death valley
struggling to breathe
the cloud too thick
the smoke too dark
and my rhymes too slick
give up this ain't your game
my kingship isn't something i self-proclaim
everybody know it this is my domain
but unfortunately for you you don't
but i can let it slip
disrespect and i'll make sure i bring out the whip
your just another chip off my shoulder
i just get experienced i don't get older
my rhymes stay hot while yours get colder

yo whats up nigga
ima kill you with this trigga
stop jerkin off to hannah montanah
or else get panna'd
by issy the hitman
or else Van Gils
and get back home in time
tune into ur fav show The Hills


gayboys... dont mess with Irish Gansgtaz u better learn this shit homie before i ride all ova y'all bitch-ass mcNugget faggets



whose that well who knows
guess its a hoe cause of its bitch pose
i suppose
it could be asks for a lyrical dose
but my lyrics expose
try as hard as you can you can't dodge my blows
toe-to-toe everybody know
your below me
buster ass trick don't think you own me
closest you'll ever get is to know me
even then you don't
and i'll warn you right now you won't
but only inflict damage
cause you can't handle it
imagine this
you and TF10 raping like ludachris
thats ludicrous
back off kid cause you don't know who your messing with

you ain't the greatest until your most hated

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #438 on: Oct 17, 2008, 01:31: PM »
Well tito
i ain't been here for a while,- so iam gonna take over the throne
gonna beat beat you motherfucka head with a stone
oh no oh no it's done
they all say
so wrap up your things and gett outa  here you gay
you know these crime scene investigation
that is gonna be your next destination
as a murderd fool you would lie dead on the ground
the cops would scrap you up and take you to the compound.
So i dare you to take on me
you know what it will be
there can only be one rap king

AND IT IS ME

get down motherfuckers

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #439 on: Oct 17, 2008, 02:02: PM »
Well tito
i ain't been here for a while,- so iam gonna take over the throne
gonna beat beat you motherfucka head with a stone
oh no oh no it's done
they all say
so wrap up your things and gett outa  here you gay
you know these crime scene investigation
that is gonna be your next destination
as a murderd fool you would lie dead on the ground
the cops would scrap you up and take you to the compound.
So i dare you to take on me
you know what it will be
there can only be one rap king

AND IT IS ME

get down motherfuckers
your versing the kingpin
you can't win
watching too much CSI
kid you think you a spy
we'll never see eye to eye
nor do i plan to
didn't you see what i did to the other two

you ain't the greatest until your most hated

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #440 on: Oct 17, 2008, 07:50: PM »
yall be takin me serious?
nah i aint serious,
but the way u talkin its damn straight pracarious
coz im more deadly than a cobra with an AK
and u just stepped over the thin line, ok?
i be laughin at you like a newcastle defence
so stop sittin on the fence
and take the dildo out yo ass
and start realizin that im in a different classss

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #441 on: Oct 17, 2008, 08:12: PM »
yall be takin me serious?
nah i aint serious,
but the way u talkin its damn straight pracarious
coz im more deadly than a cobra with an AK
and u just stepped over the thin line, ok?
i be laughin at you like a newcastle defence
so stop sittin on the fence
and take the dildo out yo ass
and start realizin that im in a different classss
i didn't want to take you serious
but your on my turf so you must experience
my lethal weapon
your weak and your rhymes are no exception
except when
you copied them
in other word your a fake stan
a irish man tryin to rap i just can't understand
and i'm placing a stress on irish man
cause i've spanned the world
from Somalia to Japan
and back to Sudan
and never seen a washed-up has been trying to rap
but you a never was so don't bring that crap
to me
and i take it to a tolerable degree
but posting twice ain't wise
and your loss isn't a surprise

you ain't the greatest until your most hated

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #442 on: Oct 18, 2008, 12:16: AM »
I'll let you all fight
while I sit back and observe
I rule by right
while you all grovel and serve,
I don't need to prove my might
you've all seen it in action
my governance is a light
free of refraction,
I taught God how to rap
now his lines are off the map
but wait I am He,
I'm God in all my sactity,
so you all commit blasphemy
when you mere mortals rhyme against me,
'cause I'm too great
for you to understand
so all you can do is hate,
because I rule and command. 
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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #443 on: Oct 18, 2008, 05:59: AM »
stop thinkin about ur rhymes for hours at
a time.
i just write this for fun
spend 30 seconds writin till im done,
but still my raps are funny
and im as sweet as honey
so stop tryin to be a pro
and keep sukin my dick you hoe