tbh i like it without text. the cutting on the hair couldve been feathered/better, but its not really noticeable. overall looks very very nice, i dont really like the solid lines... ie the white line going up from his left hand, or the horizontal line that joins up with that above his head. im thinking theyre the borders of the original image? you disguised it well but personally id get rid. but it still looks great, you dont really notice it.
