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Intro (Comment Editing)^^
« on: Jun 01, 2008, 02:01: AM »
I made an intro for a friend:
http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=prAF-pnjszc
Please comment it,
i practiced editing and this was the result...
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Re: Intro (Comment Editing)^^
« Reply #1 on: Jun 01, 2008, 03:48: AM »
Can tell by the effects you've used after effects yes?
It looks quite good, I'd just say he text rotating through eachother in my opinion doesn't work very well, and the colours are a bit tacky. Also you have the logo in the middle and lots of black space around it, it would be best to fill it all up. Keep going.

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Re: Intro (Comment Editing)^^
« Reply #2 on: Jun 01, 2008, 06:51: AM »
dont really like it. to long for only one pic

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Re: Intro (Comment Editing)^^
« Reply #3 on: Jul 04, 2008, 09:54: PM »
wow.... ur all over the place with that one.  try to actually have a concept and run with it, not just messing around with a buncha effects.
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Re: Intro (Comment Editing)^^
« Reply #4 on: Jul 06, 2008, 09:29: AM »
cmon guys give him a little credit  :hello:

good job, if i ever want one doing i know were to come  :cheers:


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Re: Intro (Comment Editing)^^
« Reply #5 on: Jul 10, 2008, 04:57: AM »
Not here? tbh

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Re: Intro (Comment Editing)^^
« Reply #6 on: Jul 10, 2008, 06:38: AM »
Not here? tbh

i second that notion
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Re: Intro (Comment Editing)^^
« Reply #7 on: Jul 13, 2008, 05:47: AM »
What the hell are you talking about??? :down:

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Re: Intro (Comment Editing)^^
« Reply #8 on: Jul 13, 2008, 10:14: AM »
What the hell are you talking about??? :down:

it wasn't good.  i suggest u take my advice ^
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