Its about time your wearing proper clothes, rather then wearing stupid freestyle clothes LOL, and its good to see you h ave shoes on.
Anyways, there were things in ur vid that i liked and alot that i didnt, your head/shoulder isolations are really good, and your hitting is good however can be better, your waving is really stiff, and your tutting needs work. Your gliding wasnt really gliding. You need to start to learn how to dance to the beat, "beat riding" it makes the video more interesting and makes you look ten times betta, also neva make so long videos, its not freestyle. With dance you only need at least a 1 minute, not more then a minute then a half to show what you got, otherwise your just gonna get really repetitive which is how it was in this video
I reckon you should start liquid dancing, so you can get mroe into the flow of dancing, rather then being stiff alot, and alot of poppers do look stiff, so you gotta mix it up, mixing it with gliding is good, but your not good at that, so keep on practising
Anyways, like i said get into the beat of the music, try not to be stiff, work alot more on your waving, and keep practising, i can say that you are alot better then you were when you first made a video so long ago.
If you need any more advise or questions wateva just ask
Also what i mean by getting into the beat can be shown in this vid, this is just an example of a quick video i could find.
http://fr.youtube.com/watch?v=emrSt5Xk2Ec
