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Re: Awesome lp by Stefan Florescu
« Reply #1 on: Sep 25, 2011, 01:35: AM »
really good lp, one of the greatest crowds ive ever seen too!
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Re: Awesome lp by Stefan Florescu
« Reply #2 on: Sep 25, 2011, 05:56: AM »
it was a got talent parody.... all imitated anyone. I was imitating me. Everyone thought that someone who is imitating me. Then I did the mask down and everyone was shocked

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Re: Awesome lp by Stefan Florescu
« Reply #3 on: Sep 25, 2011, 10:17: AM »
Your show in Prague was much much better...

Personally, I don't like it when people copy ideas from other freestylers (which is what quite a few freestylers do), like you did with the beginning of your show. Of course, using the same song isn't that big of a deal, but then at least make something of your own, don't just take someone's idea and change a trick or two...

Also, you really need to broaden your trick repertoire, because more than half of your show you do the same Uppers. As soon as you try something else, especially in Lowers, you start making mistakes.

I like that you want to make a show with some kind of choreo and not just FS with music playing in the background and if you put some more effort into it, you could become a really good showman. ;)
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Re: Awesome lp by Stefan Florescu
« Reply #4 on: Sep 25, 2011, 11:43: AM »
sorry if im being rude but, awesome???

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Re: Awesome lp by Stefan Florescu
« Reply #5 on: Sep 25, 2011, 01:26: PM »
I liked it and the crowd seems great! Nice job

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Re: Awesome lp by Stefan Florescu
« Reply #6 on: Sep 25, 2011, 09:59: PM »
Personally, I don't like it when people copy ideas from other freestylers (which is what quite a few freestylers do), like you did with the beginning of your show. Of course, using the same song isn't that big of a deal, but then at least make something of your own, don't just take someone's idea and change a trick or two...
I do not understand what you mean. Please explain again what I referred to in this fragment

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Re: Awesome lp by Stefan Florescu
« Reply #7 on: Sep 26, 2011, 02:58: AM »
i really liked it. Really great, only after a while i don't like those head/neck stalls anymore cause u have done so many. I prefer more "lowers", yes i know for a crowd lowers are way harder but that would make it even more sick. U are really sick so i think ur lowers are sick 2, too bad u didn't do it.

And 1 more thing: why did u keep on freestyling? those girls in the background look more interesting than the ball, altough ur skills are sick, they are not that sick :P

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Re: Awesome lp by Stefan Florescu
« Reply #8 on: Sep 26, 2011, 03:50: AM »
Personally, I don't like it when people copy ideas from other freestylers (which is what quite a few freestylers do), like you did with the beginning of your show. Of course, using the same song isn't that big of a deal, but then at least make something of your own, don't just take someone's idea and change a trick or two...
I do not understand what you mean. Please explain again what I referred to in this fragment
The beginning of your show was a copy of Séan's (same music, same moves), with maybe one or two different tricks. Instead of doing that, try to come up with something of your won. Get it now?
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Re: Awesome lp by Stefan Florescu
« Reply #9 on: Sep 26, 2011, 04:29: AM »
Good overall show. This is the type of show that the average person would enjoy. They love the choreography and theatric elements. I personally don't care if you copied anyone or not. Most freestylers copy someone in at least a small way in every show they do. I do agree that the tricks got quite repetitive, and that from a freestylers point of view, there could have been more impressive moves. I think you were starting to fatigue in the end, because you made far more mistakes than in the beginning. Overall, very good show, because you pulled off what you were going for. It's really your choice on how you would like your shows to be, so do it however you like.
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Re: Awesome lp by Stefan Florescu
« Reply #10 on: Sep 26, 2011, 06:20: AM »
the beginning of your show was a copy of Séan's (same music, same moves), with maybe one or two different tricks. Instead of doing that, try to come up with something of your won. Get it now?

My music is the same as that of Sean. But the movement (even if the upper) are not the same. there are only two coincidences. But I know they have a clip on YouTube, with the choreography for two years now. So I could not copy Sean.
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Re: Awesome lp by Stefan Florescu
« Reply #11 on: Sep 27, 2011, 06:44: AM »
Actually I have a lot of respect for this show... A lot of background noises can seriously sway you from doing tricks, and also doing a 8 minute LP requires an insane amount of stamina.
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