Your show in Prague was much much better...
Personally, I don't like it when people copy ideas from other freestylers (which is what quite a few freestylers do), like you did with the beginning of your show. Of course, using the same song isn't that big of a deal, but then at least make something of your own, don't just take someone's idea and change a trick or two...
Also, you really need to broaden your trick repertoire, because more than half of your show you do the same Uppers. As soon as you try something else, especially in Lowers, you start making mistakes.
I like that you want to make a show with some kind of choreo and not just FS with music playing in the background and if you put some more effort into it, you could become a really good showman. ;)