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Offline PaulFreestyle

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Are these good combos?
« on: Jul 18, 2011, 04:08: AM »
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Offline samfs

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Re: Are these good combos?
« Reply #1 on: Jul 18, 2011, 06:48: AM »
Nice style man, I really liked the first combo!
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Re: Are these good combos?
« Reply #2 on: Jul 18, 2011, 06:58: AM »
very good man, but work on the flow a tiny bit more :)
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Re: Are these good combos?
« Reply #3 on: Jul 18, 2011, 07:09: AM »
Nice combos, although you need to make your eclipse look smoother
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Re: Are these good combos?
« Reply #4 on: Jul 18, 2011, 07:21: AM »
I liked them :)
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Re: Are these good combos?
« Reply #5 on: Jul 19, 2011, 12:03: AM »
work a lot more on ur eclipse, style is bad, the rest is good but try not to copy kamalio so much, just take inspiration and put your own twist on it..

but the combos are sick well done u have massive potential, where are u from
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Re: Are these good combos?
« Reply #6 on: Jul 19, 2011, 01:46: PM »
gooooooooood....!!! just didnt like the eclipse...
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Re: Are these good combos?
« Reply #7 on: Jul 19, 2011, 03:33: PM »
Quote from: DanTheMan on Jul 19, 2011, 12:03: AM
work a lot more on ur eclipse, style is bad, the rest is good but try not to copy kamalio so much, just take inspiration and put your own twist on it..
How's this copying Kamalio?

Anyways, as it was already mentioned - work on your flow a bit and work more on your Eclipse. Apart from that, the combos were good, nice NATWs. Just keep on training hard and you could have a bright future in front of you.
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Re: Are these good combos?
« Reply #8 on: Jul 20, 2011, 03:16: AM »
he just bit kamalios whole style imo.... music, style, long pants, type of tricks etc etc - im not criticizing coz obviously we all take inspiration from others for example michryc for me
but just sayin :D
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Re: Are these good combos?
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Re: Are these good combos?
« Reply #10 on: Jul 20, 2011, 05:56: AM »
Chill lol, it was only constructive criticism from Dan haha, no need to criticize criticism
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Re: Are these good combos?
« Reply #11 on: Jul 21, 2011, 12:28: AM »
Quote from: Patrick Edwards on Jul 20, 2011, 05:56: AM
Chill lol, it was only constructive criticism from Dan haha, no need to criticize criticism
Saying that he's copying when he's not is not constructive criticism.
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