Author Topic: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it  (Read 4327 times)

Offline CalleAhldénFS

  • PATW & LTATW
  • ****
  • Posts: 1,536
  • Reputation: 1007
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #12 on: Jun 16, 2011, 10:14: PM »
hum, I would say, if you should do a turtorial(,) first of all(,) use a language that everyone understands... example; 0.11 "Bcoz, n u will b" *wtf?
and as Christof said, "learn megglan(.)". Also wrong, Magellan is the right name..
Leave the tutorials to Learn2freestyle I would say in the end! but good that you tried!
Well if you want to insult his language there are a few things I would like to point out.
The first comma is a comma splice.
You should spell "tutorial" right.
You need a comma after tutorial.
You need to use a comma after "all" to maintain sentence flow.
After "megllan" the period goes INSIDE the quotation marks. 
"I would say in the end" totally fucks your sentence flow.
"But" - Never start a sentence with a conjunction.

Please use a language we can all understand, Calle. Until then, have fun with your cross overs!
What the hell is this? He's 16 and from Sweden, why are you expecting such a high standard? It's not an insult anyway!
Your logic:If you don't have perfect English you may not comment on any video in this INTERNATIONAL freestyle forum.
Thanks LIS <3 someone who understands me <3
and Sam, it's better to do crossovers than nothing.
Never Give Up!

Offline Tupac

  • APATW & PMATW
  • *****
  • Posts: 5,031
  • Reputation: 2790
  • Merry Christmas!
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #13 on: Jun 17, 2011, 02:53: AM »
Call me Professor English, I'm here to rape your mind! I thought it was pretty mean to "insult" (I use insult) someone who clearly has a language barrier. I am not asking for proper English, I don't even give a fuck if you can't spell anything right. If we can some what make out what you are trying to say then it's alright with me! Calle is just a mean bully who picked on this kid for having a language barrier; which I find ironic since he couldn't spell "tutorial" right.
So at that, I leave you Calle with this.
Taylor Swift - Mean
BONER!

Offline rOHs

  • ATW & Crossover
  • *
  • Posts: 48
  • Reputation: 158
  • live freestyle football
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #14 on: Jun 17, 2011, 03:42: AM »
 :lol_hitting: XD

Offline Ricke

  • TATW & LATW
  • ***
  • Posts: 294
  • Reputation: 443
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #15 on: Jun 17, 2011, 05:21: AM »
No, calle has a point.

Perhaps the guy in the video doesn't know english that well but surely he knows "be" is spellt be and not "b".. it's just lazy to not do that right lol.

The same as "n" and "bcoz", it's just lazy and makes the tutorial not seem serious at all. To me it feels like most things that are explained are obvious and doesn't really go in depth, maybe it's just me though.


Offline L_I_S

  • Moderator
  • APATW & PMATW
  • ****
  • Posts: 5,118
  • Reputation: 6249
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #16 on: Jun 17, 2011, 05:35: AM »
No, calle has a point.

Perhaps the guy in the video doesn't know english that well but surely he knows "be" is spellt be and not "b".. it's just lazy to not do that right lol.

The same as "n" and "bcoz", it's just lazy and makes the tutorial not seem serious at all. To me it feels like most things that are explained are obvious and doesn't really go in depth, maybe it's just me though.
cuz he want 2 sav tym so he b train mo. smrt, not lzy.


That was me once upon a time ;(
http://www.youtube.com/user/LISdafreestyler
-Don't break combos.
-Don't use crossovers to save combos.
-If you're a new freestyler looking to improve, check the stickys in the help and advice section.
-Send me a personal message if you see spam.

Offline BigMac

  • APATW & PMATW
  • *****
  • Posts: 3,722
  • Reputation: 4972
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #17 on: Jun 17, 2011, 09:10: AM »
This tutorial is better than others (e.g., learn2freestyle), but still at its low level.

I haven't made a beck tutorial so your comment is retarded.

Offline CalleAhldénFS

  • PATW & LTATW
  • ****
  • Posts: 1,536
  • Reputation: 1007
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #18 on: Jun 17, 2011, 12:09: PM »
Sam; "Calle is just a mean bully who picked on this kid for having a language barrier"
that wasn't the point of my post, I just wanted he to know my opinions for a maybe better tutorial in the future. But I already know you hate me Sam, so I don't want to discuss anymore.
Never Give Up!

Offline Tupac

  • APATW & PMATW
  • *****
  • Posts: 5,031
  • Reputation: 2790
  • Merry Christmas!
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #19 on: Jun 17, 2011, 01:06: PM »
Calle I never meant to start a war, you know I never want to hurt you, don't even know what we're fighting for,

"Why does Love always feel like a Battlefield"

WHY DOES LOVE ALWAYS FEEL LIKE A BATTLE FIELD? A BATTLE FIELD? A BATTLE FIELD?!?!
BONER!

Offline ahemmerFS

  • ATW & Crossover
  • *
  • Posts: 45
  • Reputation: 186
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #20 on: Jun 18, 2011, 01:31: AM »
sorry guyz for my english n so so many mistake's this was my first tutorial which i have done for my friend ......i will try better in future  :c017:

Offline dunnowhois

  • TATW & LATW
  • ***
  • Posts: 378
  • Reputation: 802
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #21 on: Jun 18, 2011, 01:48: AM »
This tutorial is better than others (e.g., learn2freestyle), but still at its low level.

I haven't made a beck tutorial so your comment is retarded.
If you made it wouldnt be that hard to guees what I would see there. Same senseless stories about tricks, which cant be called 'tutorial', even helpful.

Offline BigMac

  • APATW & PMATW
  • *****
  • Posts: 3,722
  • Reputation: 4972
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #22 on: Jun 18, 2011, 07:41: AM »
Well I haven't made it, have I? So trying to slag me off is completely stupid. You always come on here and try and insult me and my videos, it's pretty sad. Stop hating on the whole freestyle scene outside of Russia just because you are injured.

Offline dunnowhois

  • TATW & LATW
  • ***
  • Posts: 378
  • Reputation: 802
    • View Profile
Re: BECKS TUTORIAL BY ME plz watch it
« Reply #23 on: Jun 18, 2011, 08:09: AM »
Well I haven't made it, have I? So trying to slag me off is completely stupid. You always come on here and try and insult me and my videos, it's pretty sad. Stop hating on the whole freestyle scene outside of Russia just because you are injured.
I'm less nervous than when I was fsing. I never complain about my injury because I know it's my stupidity that I have that. About turorial - if I see at least 3 your turorials will next of them be different to those? Of course no, you have not got any knowledge about how to make helpful tutorials, you just were the first who took that thing (video-tutorials) seriously and constantly made new videos with nothing in them.