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JPA - ELEMENTS
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« Reply #1 on: May 13, 2011, 01:42: PM »
I really liked it john, lmatw-matw nt was sick, and so was batw-matw nt. Keep it up man, like the longer combos, maybe a bit more weak foot, sick man.

- the part where the ball was on fire.... pallur will fight you! ;)
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« Reply #2 on: May 13, 2011, 01:51: PM »
Nice man I liked the almatw combo, and lmatw -matw nt, you got better man and its nice to see you didn't break a combo


- the part where the ball was on fire.... pallur will fight you! ;)

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« Reply #3 on: May 13, 2011, 02:42: PM »
this video fail in the epicness of the intro i got a say that for braking combos and  don't improving your know in  good path to be better in lower sooo keep on training and who is that hot girl in the beginning, it looks like your know England ?0'

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« Reply #4 on: May 13, 2011, 08:47: PM »
Actually i like this vid a lot , but i didnt even counted 1 single atw weak foot . Only thing i saw you doing wf was palle trick.. work on weak foot :)

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« Reply #5 on: May 13, 2011, 10:08: PM »
I see some improvement. your lmatws and amatws were impressive, i liked them. good combos but you really need to add weak foot atws. I liked that beck hmatw and bmatw - matw nt. your style is pretty good too. not bendy.
try working on out moves and your weak leg. hatws will beautify your combos
you need more practice on your sits. those alternate co's were horrible, sorry. also, don't use many touches in your sit combos. keep them flowing.
on the editing, it was good effort but I think you need to keep a standard or theme in your video. some of the effects were very random like that reverse fish eye or whatever you call it.
all in all it was ok. i enjoyed it but you can do much better. Take some of the advices and you'll do great.

one more thing, where do you get your subscribers and comments from? those youtubers are defo not freestylers. they're just random users lol. I don't recognize any of them.

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Re: JPA - ELEMENTS
« Reply #6 on: May 14, 2011, 12:06: AM »
good improvement man, lmatw matw nt was sweeeet... finally thank god ur not breaking combos
keep it up and train weak foot a lot more
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Re: JPA - ELEMENTS
« Reply #7 on: May 14, 2011, 12:23: AM »
good improvement man, lmatw matw nt was sweeeet... finally thank god ur not breaking combos
keep it up and train weak foot a lot more
peace
and u have a very good style brow.
Very nice, i liked the quality of the camera and palces continued yours trainings peace.
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« Reply #8 on: May 14, 2011, 12:57: AM »
lmatw matw nt was sick good job!

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« Reply #9 on: May 14, 2011, 04:52: AM »
I see some improvement. your lmatws and amatws were impressive, i liked them. good combos but you really need to add weak foot atws. I liked that beck hmatw and bmatw - matw nt. your style is pretty good too. not bendy.
try working on out moves and your weak leg. hatws will beautify your combos
you need more practice on your sits. those alternate co's were horrible, sorry. also, don't use many touches in your sit combos. keep them flowing.
on the editing, it was good effort but I think you need to keep a standard or theme in your video. some of the effects were very random like that reverse fish eye or whatever you call it.
all in all it was ok. i enjoyed it but you can do much better. Take some of the advices and you'll do great.

one more thing, where do you get your subscribers and comments from? those youtubers are defo not freestylers. they're just random users lol. I don't recognize any of them.


thanks for the advice, but about the editing, IMO there there where no "random" effects in the video, they are all there for a reason, to beautify the video, just using something like a reverse fish eye or stuff like that issent making a random effect. its just enhancing a scene, that sits scene where i do cross's with both feet was indeed horrible, but my sits in general have a nice flow to them, what i have to work on is using both feet cuz i really suck at everything with my left foot on sits, and about the subs, well dude most of my fans in general are non-freestylers...but you probably already know that so i dont see the point of that question xD

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« Reply #10 on: May 14, 2011, 05:22: AM »
the only thing i wanna know is.. . . . . . . . who is that HOT chick in the beginning?

great vid, great lowers, great style. but seriously lets get back to the chick shall we?  :great:

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« Reply #11 on: May 14, 2011, 05:25: AM »
nice work JPA. both on freestyle and filming/editing. really enjoyed the video, you put a lot of effort into it and it was well worth it. something you can be proud of.
p.s. who will run your academy back home now that you are in europe?
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