I see some improvement. your lmatws and amatws were impressive, i liked them. good combos but you really need to add weak foot atws. I liked that beck hmatw and bmatw - matw nt. your style is pretty good too. not bendy.
try working on out moves and your weak leg. hatws will beautify your combos
you need more practice on your sits. those alternate co's were horrible, sorry. also, don't use many touches in your sit combos. keep them flowing.
on the editing, it was good effort but I think you need to keep a standard or theme in your video. some of the effects were very random like that reverse fish eye or whatever you call it.
all in all it was ok. i enjoyed it but you can do much better. Take some of the advices and you'll do great.
one more thing, where do you get your subscribers and comments from? those youtubers are defo not freestylers. they're just random users lol. I don't recognize any of them.