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Freestyle T-Shirt Design I just made
« on: Feb 09, 2011, 08:13: AM »
Freestyle T-Shirt Design:







What do you think?  Would you buy it?
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Re: Freestyle T-Shirt Design I just made
« Reply #1 on: Feb 09, 2011, 08:18: AM »
To be honest... I wouldn't buy it. I'd make the left freestyler bigger, move the text down a little. That would make it look considerably better imo.

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Re: Freestyle T-Shirt Design I just made
« Reply #2 on: Feb 09, 2011, 08:20: AM »
OK, so get rid of the right guy and just have the left one in the middle?   Thanks for the feedback.

The reason I had both of them is because I originally had "freestyle battles" below the two guys.
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Re: Freestyle T-Shirt Design I just made
« Reply #3 on: Feb 09, 2011, 08:29: AM »


How's that for the front?
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Re: Freestyle T-Shirt Design I just made
« Reply #4 on: Feb 09, 2011, 09:01: AM »
Looks way better, maybe try out with the font on top, and the freestyler on the bottom? I don't know, might look better, might look worse.

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Re: Freestyle T-Shirt Design I just made
« Reply #5 on: Feb 09, 2011, 11:35: AM »
"Football" goes first then "Freestyle".
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Re: Freestyle T-Shirt Design I just made
« Reply #6 on: Feb 09, 2011, 05:36: PM »
"Football" goes first then "Freestyle".

really? i have always said it the other way. Freestyle Football.
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Re: Freestyle T-Shirt Design I just made
« Reply #7 on: Feb 09, 2011, 05:40: PM »
Freestyle football implies it is a freestyle version of the sport football...
Football freestyle implies it is freestyle with a football...

So I would say people like billy wingrove are freestyle footballers and the people on this forum are football freestylers!

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« Reply #8 on: Feb 09, 2011, 06:54: PM »
Freestyle football implies it is a freestyle version of the sport football...
Football freestyle implies it is freestyle with a football...

So I would say people like billy wingrove are freestyle footballers and the people on this forum are football freestylers!

I've always felt that its the other way around... The way i see it, both freestyle football and football freestyle can imply that its a freestyle version of the sport football... imo, if you say football freestyle, the emphasis is on the "football" because that's what's said first, and it gives the impression that the football is what is more important. However, Freestyle football is the other way around, and emphasises the freestyle.

However, i can see why people say it both ways... Most of the time i just call it "Freestyle" anyway, fuck the football off :)
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Re: Freestyle T-Shirt Design I just made
« Reply #9 on: Feb 09, 2011, 07:04: PM »
Freestyle football implies it is a freestyle version of the sport football...
Football freestyle implies it is freestyle with a football...

So I would say people like billy wingrove are freestyle footballers and the people on this forum are football freestylers!
Absolutely correct.  :great:
It could be the other way around when translated to other languages.

Freestyle football implies it is a freestyle version of the sport football...
Football freestyle implies it is freestyle with a football...

So I would say people like billy wingrove are freestyle footballers and the people on this forum are football freestylers!

I've always felt that its the other way around... The way i see it, both freestyle football and football freestyle can imply that its a freestyle version of the sport football... imo, if you say football freestyle, the emphasis is on the "football" because that's what's said first, and it gives the impression that the football is what is more important. However, Freestyle football is the other way around, and emphasises the freestyle.
What about with no emphasis on either?
The way I see is that in "football freestyle", you could be talking about the ball...where as with "freestyle football", there's no chance that you are talking about the ball.
We could look at it like this, "soccer freestyle" or "freestyle soccer". Obviously the latter means the freestyle version of soccer and the first one just sounds improper.
Anyway, that's my reasoning. I just call it freestyle of course.


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Re: Freestyle T-Shirt Design I just made
« Reply #10 on: Feb 09, 2011, 07:12: PM »
Cool t-shirt Adi the man!

I call it Football Freestyle myself, and i think that sound less gay then Freestyle Football imo,

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Re: Freestyle T-Shirt Design I just made
« Reply #11 on: Feb 10, 2011, 03:55: AM »
What do you think about the text on the back?

"My freestyle is > yours"

Nice and catchy or no?
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