Author Topic: I ludda get down (Freestyle) *open to criticism*  (Read 4271 times)

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Re: I ludda get down (Freestyle) *open to criticism*
« Reply #36 on: Jul 27, 2008, 06:37: AM »
no your work sucks too bad for you to be doing it right
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Re: I ludda get down (Freestyle) *open to criticism*
« Reply #37 on: Jul 27, 2008, 08:33: AM »
yo, check it,
my flow is immaculate,
and it aint coz i is catholic,
im down with it,
just like ur girlfriend be down
when i be smackin it
so stop jackin it,
ridiculous rhymin comes out yo mouth,
like a titus bramble clearance, it just. never gets out....
Stop tryin to spit it
like when u spittin
out his cum, beware coz soon as u think its finished
he gown say "bitch, i aint done!"

lets see what u got lol
thats the first rap i ever made up

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Re: I ludda get down (Freestyle) *open to criticism*
« Reply #38 on: Jul 27, 2008, 07:31: PM »
thats better then Hook.


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Re: I ludda get down (Freestyle) *open to criticism*
« Reply #39 on: Jul 28, 2008, 02:54: AM »
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like a titus bramble clearance, it just. never gets out...
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http://www.beyondfootball.com/forum/index.php?topic=33.210
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Re: I ludda get down (Freestyle) *open to criticism*
« Reply #40 on: Jul 28, 2008, 03:00: AM »
Wahoo! Your first lock hahaha.  :cheers:
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