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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #276 on: Sep 23, 2008, 12:15: PM »
hook all you're doing is spewing cliches
designed to warp the mind
and leave you in a daze...
but in me you'll find
an opponent to fear
whose head is clear
and unfazed by your linguistic confusion
and knows all too well
the power of illusion,
but I stand strong by my conviction
weaving infernos of diction
that glide with no friction
and spin truth, not fiction.
My rhymes are a knell
that resounds throughout the land,
a liberation from hell,
a message to understand.

So understand, and be silenced.
You pussies get put in the coffin with all that psycho-path talkin
blood on your cheap white shoes and that ugly $30 dollar throwback you rockin
when u around my part of the forum, you watch where your walkin
hold that bird out the window and let em sore from my aston martin
ask me how i got it? i move packs by the O
who am i coppin off? wouldn't you like to know
I don't even know why u responded to try and battle me
when i got 5 thou-wow on my wrist and i aint even got a salary
im untouchable ask Roy, im on a different planet in a whole nother galaxy
you thinkin Hook soft is a common fallacy, beating you to death with my metaphors and analogies
you must be dillusionnnnnnal if you think you gon pull the bitch outta me
I tried to get outta sellin the gram of that white
but a bank account with less than a thou just wasnt soundin right
you young and 16, i wish we would be meet in the street, leave you lookin like swiss cheese
holes in you, the cops couldnt even fix me, cause i got bail money, i'm rich B
rock the invicta with custom diamonds on the left, solid gold bracelet on the other wrist
diamond jesus piece, princess cuts in the ring, i gotta add another twist
lacoste shades, no brades no fades, just a fitted cap, with a throwback, it's D.Wade
erase you cockroaches with my lines, what rhymes with rade?
You a bitch, i see the twinkle in your eye when the shank come out
even if you got the members on your side, i can still crush you with my bank account




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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #277 on: Sep 23, 2008, 03:05: PM »
Tito, you're such a shit member
when was the last time you made a good post, please help me remember
you're a hoax, don't even boast, you're rhymes are just jokes
you think you're big and you think you've got rep
but i've had all the rep since before you took your first step
man i dont wanna brag, but you cant even touch my swag
dont go posting your weak soft raps
because no one here even claps.
that rap was kinda average, you make more mistakes than robbie savage
talking about my first step dawg you weren't born till me and your mamma slept
and i ain't gonna spend too much time on you, cause you know two lines will do

Tito give up now, you've got no chance,
I can fry your brains with a glance,
beat you in any circumstance,
or lull you into a trance
with words intricate as mosquito netting...
but let the banter end,
lets begin the blood letting --
say hello to your doom, my friend,
for your death will be a godsend,
my verbal lashings now commence,
and you pale to a snail
in my divine presence,
but maybe I should alter the theme of this rap:
Tito, your verses are a pile of crap,
frail twigs that I can snap --
I'll drive you off the map,
you're slime under my feet,
squeeling that you're not beat,
and the irony is
that you already are,
so make way for this,
my rising star,
'cause you were never bright,
so accept my victory by right --
you're in a losing fight.
kid i ain't even started yet,
and though we never met
i see right through you
too much time watching star wars and practicing kung-fu
when you gonna wake up and take off that make-up
the stakes are high
its do or die
don't even try
to beat the best
when you ain't even gone through the rest
oli, mac and all that
still got TJ hook on ya back
walking all-over ya like a doormat
i don't know why you being hater
maybe cause i'm serving ya like a waiter
you and Borg can never get to level
i'll be over yous like a escalator
finding it hard to breathe kid you gone need a respirator

you ain't the greatest until your most hated

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #278 on: Sep 23, 2008, 05:30: PM »
wtf tito is owning booth of you guys,


damn this shit is hot


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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #279 on: Sep 24, 2008, 04:13: AM »
yo tito i take it back fool, you are treal, your tearing both of those dudes up

 :cheers: yeahhhh thats sick

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #280 on: Sep 24, 2008, 04:25: AM »
yo tito i take it back fool, you are treal, your tearing both of those dudes up

 :cheers: yeahhhh thats sick
i've changed my views on you too


imagine a tag team rap battle lol
Team Canada v The Treal Squad (or somethin')

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #281 on: Sep 24, 2008, 12:15: PM »
all of you are flies in my ear
you buzz all day long,
but nobody hears
your poorly crafted song.

I need no more justifications,
all my raps are dominations,
revelations, emancipations,
throwing layers of sensations
around your eyes
asking you to realize
my supremacy,
my monarchy,
my supreme deity,
but apparently you are blind --
I'm the only one who can see
through the ignorance that cloaks your mind...
my words set your fledgeling intellects free,
this is my vision, my sight,
my dirge towards the right,
my utterance of light,
my clarion call to fight,
a testament to my might.
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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #282 on: Sep 24, 2008, 01:15: PM »
yo tito i take it back fool, you are treal, your tearing both of those dudes up

 :cheers: yeahhhh thats sick
i've changed my views on you too


imagine a tag team rap battle lol
Team Canada v The Treal Squad (or somethin')
thats hella sick i like that :cheers:

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #283 on: Sep 24, 2008, 01:40: PM »
I dont...I'd have to be with borg...he isnt very good at this...
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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #284 on: Sep 24, 2008, 04:00: PM »
I dont...I'd have to be with borg...he isnt very good at this...
oh shii you dissin' your main man :boxing:
nah to be honest Borg is good  :dontknow:

and thats another one of your problems you don't seem to get along with anyone :argue:

i'll reply to your rap later

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #285 on: Sep 24, 2008, 05:23: PM »
tru that borg was doing well,


he must be depressed now

just dont kill your self borg, there are people the still love you


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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #286 on: Sep 24, 2008, 11:03: PM »
can't believe you still posting
out of the race but still hoping
thats what i like to see
even though your not close to me
you try to cling on
to the icon
overlapped you at least 5 times
with my sublime rhymes
but you still talking
but talking the walk
ticktock times over
take you dictionary and your clover
your luck has ran out
but thats no reason to be sober

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #287 on: Sep 25, 2008, 05:09: AM »
all of you are flies in my ear
you buzz all day long,
but nobody hears
your poorly crafted song.

I need no more justifications,
all my raps are dominations,
revelations, emancipations,
throwing layers of sensations
around your eyes
asking you to realize
my supremacy,
my monarchy,
my supreme deity,
but apparently you are blind --
I'm the only one who can see
through the ignorance that cloaks your mind...
my words set your fledgeling intellects free,
this is my vision, my sight,
my dirge towards the right,
my utterance of light,
my clarion call to fight,
a testament to my might.
You sound like a amateur poet gettin booed off stage at the apollo
tryin to be lyrical, for you to sound sick its gonna take a miracle--your heads hollow
you can learn from my style but dont follow, i kicked it with kareem and diggs before they got alto,
laughin at you trying to be macho, i get this paper, only thing u got green is the guacamole on your nachos
bummy ass clothes, i would never rock those, copyin my style the way i lock foes, praisin Hook cuz he got flows
posted up at the end of a rainbow the way i got gold, nerdy ass mothafucka when he wears pants his socks show
Whenever you drop your freestyle i literally shake my head, cause nothing you say ~make sense~
i guess thats what that does to you when you broke, you only ~make cents~
you the type of cat that would buy a honda cause it look like a fake benz
i'm as cold as blue-- Totalfootball?? pfffff Treal Squad have totally totaled you
you a homo, you and borg are at the edge of relation,
totaldouchebag how do you think your smart when you only got a highschool education?