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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #660 on: Feb 27, 2009, 03:01: PM »
I havn't read Titos but Jono you really suck
i actually onlt looked at that once and thought he said
"I havn't read Titos but Jono you really sick"
hahaha  :lol: :lol: :lol: hahaha

i'll reply after i return from Melbourne V Adelaide

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #661 on: Feb 27, 2009, 11:53: PM »
I havn't read Titos but Jono you really suck
i actually onlt looked at that once and thought he said
"I havn't read Titos but Jono you really sick"
hahaha  :lol: :lol: :lol: hahaha

i'll reply after i return from Melbourne V Adelaide
u were there 2! did u c me performing :P
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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #662 on: Feb 28, 2009, 07:14: AM »
I need one line
to show how you are servile
and I'm divine.

My verses are top of the line
while yours are sterile --
I need one line

to show why Sublime is mine,
and that I can go the full mile.
And I'm divine,

the way I shine,
each syllable a projectile --
I need one line

to make a destructive missile,
that'd destroy New York, and wreck the Nile,
yeah, I need one line --
and I'm the epitome of divine.

Win. Do anything as hard as that format.
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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #663 on: Feb 28, 2009, 02:18: PM »
What the fuck
The fool oLi said I suck
Suck tits
While I see you suck dick
In and off of tha street
Tito your rap reminded me of sleep
I come up on tha creep
Your rhymes be oblique
You cant match up to me
Scared like oli who cant rap up in here
Look at yourself and see
The sweat on ya cheek representin your fear
Now its time for me to L  -  E  -  A -  V  -  E
Your host J to tha N, last name N to the G.

in my opinion your rap was alright
but your running out of gas i can do this all night
i'm undefeated and can't fight
child you better get your shit tight
aight
me and you on the same plat form
isn't something in the norm
man i come through like storm
hurricane
major pain
shit will never be the same
reconstruct your ligaments
go call some of your bigger friends
and find out how shit ends
fool your whole style i transcend


I need one line
to show how you are servile
and I'm divine.

My verses are top of the line
while yours are sterile --
I need one line

to show why Sublime is mine,
and that I can go the full mile.
And I'm divine,

the way I shine,
each syllable a projectile --
I need one line

to make a destructive missile,
that'd destroy New York, and wreck the Nile,
yeah, I need one line --
and I'm the epitome of divine.

Win. Do anything as hard as that format.


i challenged you to proper battle but you refuse
then you bring me this pathetic excuse of a rap
well step aside son its my turn to infuse

TF10 don't confuse views with news
and bring me this crap
cause i gotta dilute your booze

or are you high enough to confuse
cruise and bruise
your in my trap
cause your gonna lose

i'm gonna loosen the screws
and give a chance to snooze
kid take your nap
cause there's no way you walk a mile in my shoes


I havn't read Titos but Jono you really suck
i actually onlt looked at that once and thought he said
"I havn't read Titos but Jono you really sick"
hahaha  :lol: :lol: :lol: hahaha

i'll reply after i return from Melbourne V Adelaide
u were there 2! did u c me performing :P
if it was at halftime sadly i went walkabouts then

next time inform me  :lol:
we might be at same place in the future

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #664 on: Feb 28, 2009, 02:25: PM »
tito you idn't do it you did half of it

you didn't have your two repeated lines

it's called a villanelle and in difficulty is rapes any of your raps

I can write a pantoum next of you want.
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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #665 on: Feb 28, 2009, 03:00: PM »
fuck this French poem shit and just freestyle kid

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #666 on: Feb 28, 2009, 03:12: PM »
I freestyled it

I just have more talent than you and therefore can operate in a more complex and challenging format
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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #667 on: Feb 28, 2009, 05:25: PM »
I freestyled it

I just have more talent than you and therefore can operate in a more complex and challenging format
no you just kiss more ass than me and therefore get walked over like a doormat

its about time you realize your the most annoyingest fuck around and no one likes you
wouldn't make a difference if you left
in fact it would make the forum better cause you ruin thread and make shit dull

not tryin' to diss kid but its the truth

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #668 on: Mar 01, 2009, 06:51: AM »
I freestyled it

I just have more talent than you and therefore can operate in a more complex and challenging format
no you just kiss more ass than me and therefore get walked over like a doormat

its about time you realize your the most annoyingest fuck around and no one likes you
wouldn't make a difference if you left
in fact it would make the forum better cause you ruin thread and make shit dull

not tryin' to diss kid but its the truth
looks like I hit a nerve

ad hominem destroys the credibility of rap freestyle

oh wait
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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #669 on: Mar 01, 2009, 08:41: AM »
I havn't read Titos but Jono you really suck
i actually onlt looked at that once and thought he said
"I havn't read Titos but Jono you really sick"
hahaha  :lol: :lol: :lol: hahaha

i'll reply after i return from Melbourne V Adelaide
u were there 2! did u c me performing :P

I wuz at the game aswell. When and where did u preform.

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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #670 on: Mar 01, 2009, 11:12: AM »
I havn't read Titos but Jono you really suck
i actually onlt looked at that once and thought he said
"I havn't read Titos but Jono you really sick"
hahaha  :lol: :lol: :lol: hahaha

i'll reply after i return from Melbourne V Adelaide
u were there 2! did u c me performing :P

I wuz at the game aswell. When and where did u preform.
it was at gate 2, from 5.30-7.30. how awesome was that red card :rolleyes:
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Re: the rap brap offcial rap thread
« Reply #671 on: Mar 01, 2009, 04:51: PM »
looks like I hit a nerve

ad hominem destroys the credibility of rap freestyle

oh wait
what eva child quit ruining the thread with that bullshit

I havn't read Titos but Jono you really suck
i actually onlt looked at that once and thought he said
"I havn't read Titos but Jono you really sick"
hahaha  :lol: :lol: :lol: hahaha

i'll reply after i return from Melbourne V Adelaide
u were there 2! did u c me performing :P

I wuz at the game aswell. When and where did u preform.
it was at gate 2, from 5.30-7.30. how awesome was that red card :rolleyes:
oh so you were outside the whole time?

btw i enter thought Gate 5 so...  :bang:

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