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JPA - Happy birthday dad
« on: Aug 03, 2011, 06:50: AM »
I filmed this video over 4 days, its dedicated to my dad on his birthday because he is currently in Venezuela and im in the UK.
JPA - Happy birthday dad

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Re: JPA - Happy birthday dad
« Reply #1 on: Aug 03, 2011, 08:56: AM »
the sits are getting better, but they are not very clean. work on it

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Re: JPA - Happy birthday dad
« Reply #2 on: Aug 03, 2011, 09:09: AM »
Nice but work on your lower and sits style..!!

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« Reply #3 on: Aug 03, 2011, 09:16: AM »
I don't mind the lowers style too much, but the sitdown style can definitely be worked on. Amatws are looking very strong, the one with 12 amatws was pretty sweet but you gotta work that weak foot man! your combos would look fantastic if you added weak foot stuff, and I bet you'll be able to do stuff like tatw-amatw-matw all nt with a bit of practices, give that a try :D

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« Reply #4 on: Aug 03, 2011, 02:29: PM »
Right AMATW is looking very sick man! Combos are getting longer, great job!
However, I do agree with the other guys above me, your sitdown style does need a little work. Keep trying to get your feet all the way over the ball. You'll get it soon!
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« Reply #5 on: Aug 03, 2011, 10:22: PM »
your lowers style is pretty good, sits sucks unclean and rubbish work on that
also wf would have made everything better, and another thing 6 min videos are twaay to long
2-3 is enough, it start getting so boring after 3mins
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Re: JPA - Happy birthday dad
« Reply #6 on: Aug 03, 2011, 10:30: PM »
your lowers style is pretty good, sits sucks unclean and rubbish work on that
also wf would have made everything better, and another thing 6 min videos are twaay to long
2-3 is enough, it start getting so boring after 3mins
peace
who are you to say my sits are rubbish?? there alot better than your's.

I don't mind the lowers style too much, but the sitdown style can definitely be worked on. Amatws are looking very strong, the one with 12 amatws was pretty sweet but you gotta work that weak foot man! your combos would look fantastic if you added weak foot stuff, and I bet you'll be able to do stuff like tatw-amatw-matw all nt with a bit of practices, give that a try :D
Yeah, i gotta work on my sits style alot cuz i do tend to do unclean moves sometimes, but considering sits arent something i practice alot i would say there good :D and i started working on left foot stuff 1 week ago cuz untill now my left foot is htw only, lol, i should be able to get stuff like matw-amatwnt-amatwnt in my next vid though, thanks for the feedback :)

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Re: JPA - Happy birthday dad
« Reply #7 on: Aug 03, 2011, 10:38: PM »
your lowers style is pretty good, sits sucks unclean and rubbish work on that
also wf would have made everything better, and another thing 6 min videos are twaay to long
2-3 is enough, it start getting so boring after 3mins
peace
who are you to say my sits are rubbish?? there alot better than your's.
Why would his opinion have to be justified by his own skill level? That makes no sense.
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Re: JPA - Happy birthday dad
« Reply #8 on: Aug 03, 2011, 10:59: PM »
your lowers style is pretty good, sits sucks unclean and rubbish work on that
also wf would have made everything better, and another thing 6 min videos are twaay to long
2-3 is enough, it start getting so boring after 3mins
peace
who are you to say my sits are rubbish?? there alot better than your's.
Why would his opinion have to be justified by his own skill level? That makes no sense.
if you say something like "your sits style is not very good and its unclean, work on that" then thats fine and i will take that as feedback to improve, but if your gonna tell me they suck and there complete rubbish, then its because your are better than mine, otherwise you got no bussiness talking like that about someone else's skills if they are better than yours

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Re: JPA - Happy birthday dad
« Reply #9 on: Aug 04, 2011, 10:41: PM »
JPA - every post you write drugs you down. Stop doing it, just paste link and don't say anything. And please, don't answer on my post.

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« Reply #10 on: Aug 04, 2011, 11:24: PM »
your lowers style is pretty good, sits sucks unclean and rubbish work on that
also wf would have made everything better, and another thing 6 min videos are twaay to long
2-3 is enough, it start getting so boring after 3mins
peace
who are you to say my sits are rubbish?? there alot better than your's.
Why would his opinion have to be justified by his own skill level? That makes no sense.
if you say something like "your sits style is not very good and its unclean, work on that" then thats fine and i will take that as feedback to improve, but if your gonna tell me they suck and there complete rubbish, then its because your are better than mine, otherwise you got no bussiness talking like that about someone else's skills if they are better than yours
Therefore you can't say anything about Skora, MP etc because they are better than you.
If you think like that with the negative you have to use that same example for positive as well. Do you see the problem?
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Re: JPA - Happy birthday dad
« Reply #11 on: Aug 05, 2011, 12:07: AM »
who in your family has big chin, jpa?  :grin:

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