God forbid the kid wanted to help some beginners learn a trick, imo, the tutorial was fine.
hum, I would say, if you should do a turtorial(,) first of all(,) use a language that everyone understands... example; 0.11 "Bcoz, n u will b" *wtf?
and as Christof said, "learn megglan(.)". Also wrong, Magellan is the right name..
Leave the tutorials to Learn2freestyle I would say in the end! but good that you tried!
Well if you want to insult his language there are a few things I would like to point out.
The first comma is a comma splice.
You should spell "tutorial" right.
You need a comma after tutorial.
You need to use a comma
after "all" to maintain sentence flow.
After "megllan" the period goes INSIDE the quotation marks.
"I would say in the end" totally fucks your sentence flow.
"But" - Never start a sentence with a conjunction.
Please use a language we can all understand, Calle. Until then, have fun with your cross overs!