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Short Vid
« on: May 01, 2011, 11:29: AM »
Noah Beyondfootball Beginner Qualification Vid I would love to know your opinions on this

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Re: Short Vid
« Reply #1 on: May 01, 2011, 11:59: AM »
do you realize the ball is not really supposed to touch the ground when you do that kind of lowers?
you do only atws-co not ground - almost all the rest here is ground - i don't understand how you don't see it yourself man

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Re: Short Vid
« Reply #2 on: May 01, 2011, 12:00: PM »
You don't want opnions you want views  :sign0151:

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Re: Short Vid
« Reply #3 on: May 01, 2011, 02:16: PM »
If you guys think its ground ill try and make it more obvious, in frame by frame it looked landed to me when I was editing, but your opinion matters more so ill try and make it better for next time.  :c017: for the comments

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Re: Short Vid
« Reply #4 on: May 01, 2011, 02:25: PM »
Not bad for a first video. Try to throw in some more htws in your long combos.
One thing you should work on is that after you land a combo, if you don't juggle atleast 3 times after it, don't bother putting it in the video. It just looks bad. Common mistake.

do you realize the ball is not really supposed to touch the ground when you do that kind of lowers?
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Re: Short Vid
« Reply #5 on: May 01, 2011, 02:27: PM »
I was told to put in 2 juggles, but ill do more if it makes you happy

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Re: Short Vid
« Reply #6 on: May 01, 2011, 02:30: PM »
well i recommend to think about it noah, because i don't want to be rude - but when i see such kind of attitude i really want to be rude
in this video almost everything was ground - and it is so obvious - a brain damaged kid would have pointed it out

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Re: Short Vid
« Reply #7 on: May 01, 2011, 02:32: PM »
ok, which to think are ground, for future reference

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Re: Short Vid
« Reply #8 on: May 01, 2011, 02:41: PM »
ok, which to think are ground, for future reference
you gotta be fucking shitting me my friend
is it a joke? you seriously don't see ground tricks?
well hjatw, alatw, palle move, ahmatw..  - should i continue this list? everything in this video except atws-co combos

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Re: Short Vid
« Reply #9 on: May 01, 2011, 02:50: PM »
I was just making sure, I will be sure to work on it, a lot.

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Re: Short Vid
« Reply #10 on: May 01, 2011, 02:54: PM »
well good luck
e.g talking about ahmatw - compare this to yours

Freestyle:BR - Tricks - AHMATW

and being honest - don't jump to ahmatw or any other harder stuff neglecting the basics
because at the moment your basics are at a low level to go for ahmatw

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Re: Short Vid
« Reply #11 on: May 01, 2011, 02:56: PM »
I was told to put in 2 juggles, but ill do more if it makes you happy
Who told you that? It should be 3-4 for these sort of combos. 3 should be the bare minimum, so always aim for 4.
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