Didn't like the head tricks... Looks like you used your shoulder quite a bit (might be camera angles) and it was all over the place.
I did like the fact that you incorporated body tricks into everything, but it's not the same vibe I get from luki. His body to head roll to body style is very smooth.
I still loved the video, gave me a little inspiration to train uppers more, but I think your capable of getting it cleaner.