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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #36 on: Jul 10, 2008, 07:33: PM »


Oli. If its too dark let me know.  :cheers:
Damn why didn't I see this until now  :cheers:
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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #37 on: Jul 11, 2008, 12:37: AM »
The render looks cool but he looks like a plastic doll. I think the background and font could be better.
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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #38 on: Jul 11, 2008, 03:44: AM »
Ofcourse I'm not trying hard enough. lol. Wich parts need fixing? is the render the problem?

everything's bad.  the render is bad.  there are tension points with how drogba is positioned (hint, don't let any part of him come close to or touch the edges of the composition, or another object unless there's some sort of intent behind it.  leave some space, or move him a bit so a part of him is cropped out.  you do a good job of it in ur game sig).  the text is also horrible, barely visible, bad font, and doesn't have anything to do with the rest of the design and just sticks out like a sore thumb.  both the drogba text and the melbourne text.  not to mention, the sig in general looks flat, boring, unorganized and all over the place.

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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #39 on: Jul 20, 2008, 05:05: AM »

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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #40 on: Jul 20, 2008, 05:20: AM »
that's one fly nig

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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #41 on: Jul 20, 2008, 06:56: AM »


looks good man.  i like the background and how he's being worked in with the bg.  maybe it's slightly boring to put him smack dab in the centre of the composition, but that doesn't matter too much i dun think.

i'd however think about working on the text.  and i dunno what it is but it seems unfinished, like there's still something more that can be done to it.
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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #42 on: Jul 20, 2008, 04:09: PM »
Thanks for the feed back.

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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #43 on: Jul 20, 2008, 06:24: PM »


Is it possible for you to do a sig of souifane 2zani for me , please, lord Melbourne  :hello:

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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #44 on: Jul 21, 2008, 01:08: AM »
Picture seems low quality but I'll see if I can make it work if not I'll let you know.

EDIT: sorry lad the picture is very poor if you provide a higher quality picture I'll do it.
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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #45 on: Jul 21, 2008, 09:21: AM »
Will this do Your magesty



its jeon kwon, maybe have "creativity at its max"

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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #46 on: Jul 21, 2008, 07:47: PM »
wats with freesylers and monta


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Re: cookies inside
« Reply #47 on: Jul 21, 2008, 10:05: PM »
wats with freesylers and monta
monta sponsored some big names in freestyle and now noobs are going crazy willing to pay 70 pounds for a shit ball
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