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General Category => General Chat => Topic started by: Tom on Feb 05, 2009, 01:19: AM

Title: Gimme feedback!
Post by: Tom on Feb 05, 2009, 01:19: AM
Hey ho dudes!

Im finished with the basic of the new webpage for destination x, and i want some good feedback from ya'll! So please gimme some good critics. A little info about the webpage.

I used the wordpress cms as the basic. From that i added some new plugins and added some extra code in the source, to make the site fit better for the purpose.

The site will work like a project blog and we will add news (text, pictures, and videos) almost every day 'till release of the movie. So jump to the site and gimme some feedback!

Peace

http://www.destinationx.se
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: JoshClarkeFS on Feb 05, 2009, 02:29: AM
nice site


it looks good


you could work on the looks and presentation a bit better



and up at top the links they would look better in diifeerent font that looks too plain


my opinion



peace


 :cheers:
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: a;sdlfkjas;df on Feb 05, 2009, 02:58: AM
i don't like the header (the left--i don't like the font (especially the graffiti font) there, and it doesn't mesh very well).  maybe remove the white line and center the text on the right.  the gradient is very drastic.  maybe try a dark, dark gray instead of the black or move to a lighter gray at the bottom.  maybe try to enclose the header.  i think you have something there if you add a little bit of structure to it and tweak the design

on the right, i'd remove the destinationx in black.  move the gray destination x closer to the picture.  maybe cut off a little bit of the gray destination x under the picture.  the cutting on the picture isn't very good, but it's only a problem if you look at it closely

that being said, the colors run together nicely, and for its purpose, it's very clean.  it's not painful to look at it which will probably serve your audience well (considering the reason that most people will navigate to the page)

the interface is simple, and the website isn't a pain in the ass to navigate through.  i think you did a very good job there, but i was never really into coding
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: Tom on Feb 05, 2009, 03:06: AM
Thanx dude for taking your time! I will take the feedback and fix the stuff you mention. Stay tuned!
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: {++ } Lukas fs {++} on Feb 05, 2009, 05:24: AM
maybe a bit more profesionalism + presentation would be better...

excepting that its a good webpage... a destination x webpage is allways good my friend...like a porno site, presentable or unpresentable, ugly or beautiful, it will be allways good

so keep it with the good work man.... after seeing dx you have allways been one of my heros :rockit:
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: Tom on Feb 05, 2009, 06:00: AM
maybe a bit more profesionalism + presentation would be better...

excepting that its a good webpage... a destination x webpage is allways good my friend...like a porno site, presentable or unpresentable, ugly or beautiful, it will be allways good

so keep it with the good work man.... after seeing dx you have allways been one of my heros :rockit:

What do you mean with "profesionalism + presentation" ? Thanx allot! :)
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: DanTheMan on Feb 05, 2009, 06:13: AM
i think it good, it looks fun without being too un-proffesional
good layout i like the embedding of the videos it looks really sleek
i just think its cool allround no complaints!
cant wait for the movie
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: TF on Feb 05, 2009, 07:12: AM
i really like the site and i like the graffiti font
and the black and white/silver colour scheme looks sleek and professional
but i dont particulary like the banner sort of contrasts with the rest of the site design a little too much with the text/colour
also the picture at the side of each new entry thing looks a little messy
i like the bottom picture lol but i think it would look better in a different place
but i love the trailer so much especially how it sort of takes the piss out of movie trailers with the voice over its a masterpiece  :lol: :lol:
if this movie is half as good as the first one we are in for a treat
cant wait :thumbsup:
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: {++ } Lukas fs {++} on Feb 05, 2009, 07:24: AM
maybe a bit more profesionalism + presentation would be better...

excepting that its a good webpage... a destination x webpage is allways good my friend...like a porno site, presentable or unpresentable, ugly or beautiful, it will be allways good

so keep it with the good work man.... after seeing dx you have allways been one of my heros :rockit:

What do you mean with "profesionalism + presentation" ? Thanx allot! :)

I retract what I've said about profesionalism... cuz profesionalism isnt your style tom... hahah.. I meant like the:"new shitty new's", and all those things... but I retract what i've said because the page is destinated to the youth community, so I dont think a formal language, and presentation is needed....

and about presentation I mean the design in general... its not bad... but there are parts that look abit empty, try to full them... maybe a change in the color or thescreen design change will make it look better....
solid colors as black and white make it look abit empty...

but I repeat... In general its a good webpage...
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: L_I_S on Feb 05, 2009, 11:52: AM
the first thing i saw was way too many grafix, it looked cluterd and messy. the other pages looked good. :thumbsup:
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: JoshClarkeFS on Feb 08, 2009, 11:59: PM
graffiti looks siikk
can see your puttin new stuff on the site
 :thumbsup:
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: Tom on Feb 11, 2009, 09:20: AM
Thanx for all the tips dudes! I have changed some of them. A website is never finished  :dontknow:
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: renato10 on Feb 11, 2009, 09:38: AM
Wow man this really is good website , I cant w8 for destination x1.5
btw, when is ready?
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: a;sdlfkjas;df on Feb 11, 2009, 09:38: AM
i like that a lot better

 :cheers:
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: L_I_S on Feb 11, 2009, 09:39: AM
bhahahaha, nice list!
Title: Re: Gimme feedback!
Post by: serbianfreestyle on Feb 11, 2009, 10:23: AM
looks kinda crappy get more color in it