I think it was a fine lp, its clear your just trying to entertain not do hard stuff
My advice, even though im not super experienced would be:
*to make it more condensed, maybe to the routine slightly faster, or it could lose interest, just faster,
*i can see the longhaired one was trying to dance to make it more fun, but i found it getting a bit ridiculous to carry on for too long.
*Get that guy a hair cut
Otherwise its fine because you entertain this audience i guess